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[RA2/YR] 38M Toldi I Light Tank
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warrior002.the.official
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 10:08 am    Post subject:  [RA2/YR] 38M Toldi I Light Tank
Subject description: Second World War
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The 38M Toldi I was a Hungarian-made World War II light tank set up by the Royal Hungarian Army and it was the first member of the Toldi tank family. From 1942, the type was registered as the 38M Toldi A.20 and 38M Toldi A.40, respectively, on the basis of its main armament. It was based on the Swedish L-60 which's licence was bought by Ganz and MÁVAG.

Crew: 3 members
Lenght: 4,75 meters
Width: 2,14 meters
Height: 1,87 meters
Weight: 8500 kilogramms

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I was too lazy to add more colours and remap to it.


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Turet is lower and has remap. Cameo is included.

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Culverin!
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 10:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

A bit small if appropriate regardless given the basis, but otherwise good work on the shape. If you want to work on it further, I'd recommend putting remap on, say, where you see fit as detailing.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 10:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Maybe I will improve it.
I think the hull should fit the turret better if it was shorter/lower.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 1:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

the scale is perfect. the only things i would suggest to make this voxel better are
to change the turrets shape a little bit, and to add a little more remap

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warrior002.the.official
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 1:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

What kind of shape change are you thinking of? Like more rounder or blocky?

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 2:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

now the i look closely  
 
the turret looks a little bit thick compared to other vanilla tanks. making it shorter or perhaps just adding some horizontal texture lines  
is what i would try. also i would change the barrels color to a darker shade because as you can see it cant be seen against the tank.  

the small details in the front of the tank and side of the turret get all crunched up when rendered ingame. its hard to determine how it
will look ingame when looking through the 3d viewport of the voxel editor, but in general voxels look best when its a small tank with big details,
and not vice verca. at least thats what i think. the way you added texture to the model with panel lines is very nice.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 2:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Toldi vanilla edition (?)



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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 3:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

The turret is proportioned like the real tank now. If you can still give it more remap, I think you can turn the gun mantlet into one, which will give better contrast. And if the contrast is still not good enough in-game, then turn the gun barrel black like the tracks, which should do the trick.

Small details poorly rendered by the game, as pointed out by McPwny, are unfortunately a common occurrence due to them being made up of 1 voxel-wide lines and dots. I would keep them though if you ask, since they can still properly be rendered when the tank is in correct orientations.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 3:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

How about these?



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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 3:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

The proportions are quite off (looks like someone ate all the almás pite  Laughing ) If you want to be actuate then it should be about half that width.


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warrior002.the.official
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 4:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

I think I will leave it as it is (for now).

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 4:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

I forgot to check the tank's width Laughing It'll turn out fine eventually, just take your time, man.

On the plus side, your wheels are bigger and thus better proportioned Very Happy

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 6:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Mig Eater will tell you! He is fanatic about that, he knows every old stuff WWII used. He is expert, just look at his mod Smile

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 7:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

I know MasterHaosis, I'm playing it very often and I like WW stuff too, especially the tanks and ships. Smile


I'll upload it after some polishing.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2021 8:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

Sorry if I sounded a bit harsh, the size fits in nicely with the vanilla RA2 units, which would probably be preferred by the average modder.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2021 10:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote  Mark this post and the followings unread

No, you were not harsh Very Happy

I polished it a little bit, put more colours on it, made the turret less wide, modified the wheels and the hull's frontal shape.



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